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Friday 8 November 2013

Setting (Narrative)


O: Once There was a Village named smellyvill. There was a little boy named steve, and he wanted to be a Farmer like his father Barney. Steve lived with aunty carol and uncle Nigel. They had looked after him after his parents fell down the cliff. When they died he was only 5 years old. His dad was a farmer and his mum was a librarian. So his aunty went to his house and
found him all alone in the dark. Where’’ are your parents? There not here right Now’’, So she took him to her house. So they still live happily.

P: One morning Steve felt a little piece of guwy hot stuff on his skin. What is this stuff on my skin?. I think this is Lava from that old volcano. It’s starting to shake. Steve get up the volcano is going to erupt!. We’’ must get somewhere safe, but my lucky Doll, just leave it. ‘’NO’’ that’s the doll that mum made for me, Before she fell off the cliff. Fine but hurry we must leave now. Run as fast a you can if you want to live now come on lets go now lots of lava is coming out.

  S: So they run up to the hill to get to the giant vault that they built a few years ago. Come on we're nearly there. Suddenly he hears a little scream behind him and it’s his friend Will. Will has tripped over. Help! Help! I need help. I have to go back and help him out. No if you go you will risking your life to save someone else at least im doing good, not like you. You would just leave someone if they are crying in agony. So he helps him get up. So they run to the vault and they just make it in.

R: They were stand and staring at the village. I will miss that little village of ours. I thought that volcano would never erupt. Isn’t that volcano like 100 years old, it’s old but i don’t think it’s that old. ‘’ Thank you’’ for helping me when fell over, you're a good friend.  

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