My Narrative Story-Kidnapping 2.0

Once there was a man named Bob jenkins. He was running from this kidnapper that tried to kidnap him. The kidnapper had a gun And was pointing it at him. His wife was working and his son was at baseball practice . The kidnapper was chasing him until they got to the train tracks. Soon the train was coming directly to him, He rolled off the train track watching the train go past. The kidnapper was ‘’said’’ stop! you're not going to get far by running.  Bob could hear a car coming from the bend. The car stopped right in front of bob and he stopped running. out came a another kidnapper came out of the car. Bob ran on grass as he was running he felt something his pocket it was his phone. he looked at his phone it had low battery so he made his one last call he dialed 911. So he hid some until the police came the he could hear a siren coming from  

Problem
   the bend the cops start shooting at the kidnapper with the gun. The kidnapper was shot  and the other kidnapper said this means war!. The other kidnappers started shooting back at the cops. 4 cops got shot and one of the cops called the F.B.I for help. The F.B.I came eventually. Just when the arrived the last cop Just got shot. The F.B.I started shooting at the kidnappers. The F.B.I were losing so they called the S.W.A.T team to come and help them out.